Monday, 15 June 2009
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happy again.
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When I meet you at my doorstep,
I meet you for the first time
every time.
And it is lovely.
lovely, lovely.
To hear you speak
such brilliant words,
to hear you speak at all.
To see you smile
or chuckle quietly
personal, personable, intimate.
I want to see you, I want to meet you
for the first time
every time.
And float in the
lovely, lovely
Oblivion
with you as my anchor,
intertwined like twins
in the womb of space.
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like many poets, I find it difficult to write happy poetry. but I like being happy so I will just have to experiment with being happy and writing happily. :)
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Comments (11)
why is it so hard to write "happy" poetry? i can't either, but i never really understood why. but this is very good.
that was good but...nvm
@the_giant_I - I don't know. maybe it is because there are so many ways to be unhappy in comparison to the ways to be happy.
@dude_maxton - ok...
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@Alyxandri - intersting answer. i've often thought it was because i was to busy being happy to write. but that's never really true. i like your idea though.
I think your idea is better. lol... more optimisitc.
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Perhaps this is how romance makes people happy, I think. Nice poem.
thnks for the comment :)
i like the poem
The hardest thing to do is visualize what you truly want, in this case happiness, because of fear that's impossible.
Kick that fear and write those positive words.
This is truly lovely.
Happy poetry really is hard to find inspiration to write. I've always thought that it's because on average, people spend more time being unhappy than they do being happy. So they relate more to depressed, or unhappy, emotions than they do to happy ones. And for me, at least, poetry comes from emotions that I'm very familiar with.
@EndlessDepths - that's a likely theory.. but I don't know if I am one of those people who are usually unhappy.
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